He is going up a hill climb almost to steep wondering if he should jump off. No he keeps going, he finally makes it to the top heart rate is up and wondering how he is going to get down. He is excited and nervous, he has completed the challenge. He doesnt know what they might have him do now. He makes it down with all the other bikes almost growling at him. They challenge him with an even steeper hill his old suzuki might not make it. He follows a big bor yamaha blowing dust into his helmet. The yamaha gives up but he keeps going, with the bike about to quit he pushes even more. He is about to cry he is so nervous. BANG he is there at the tip top. He falls off and the bike is spinning around on the gravel. He gets down and every challenger leaves. He is so excited they didnt beat him up. He rides off onto the road to get home.
Nicely done. I love the way you build up the intensity.. I could tell that the race/challenge was very important to him. How does winning this challenge change the character?
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